rock'n'earth landscape
bretto_34 | Tue, 12/06/2011 - 03:35
Brief from client
here's the name come up with something
Just been Mucking around and thought id see what people think of it??
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4 Comments
I think the text works well... BUT- can you get rid of at least one of the quote marks? Right now you have a big frowny face in the middle of everything ---
rock : ( earth lol.
The round scribble looks like what it is- so, not super impressed with that. You can certainly go that route, but it would really need some refining. (sort of assuming thats a place-holder though)
Anyway- keep at it. I think you have something with just a text mark after a little work.
PS- my favorite client brief so far.
Contrary to G13 I do not like the typography, I think the leading is shocking and far too gappy. I know what is trying to be achieved here but I just don't think this particular font is the correct one IMHO. The "Landscaping" text is fine as it is but maybe hook it to the end of the "e" in earth.
The colours could also be a little more vibrant and the green a little earthier as it all looks a little washed out. The symbol is fairly nice but I've seen it a million times before (as shown in the link) and is floating for me at the moment again try attaching it to something.
Hope this helps.
Not going to work, 11 is right. Typography used does not provide a sense of 'landscaping' order and your symbol is just a very unimaginative doodle.
Scratch it and start over.
I agree... The scribble looks like a big scribble. I'd scrap that completely.
I'd like to see Rock in all caps and earth all lowercase, replacing the 'n' with a +. Try charcoal gray for Rock and a lime green for earth and possibly stack the words. Create a branding icon using the initials.