Romay Sales

You have two stylized typefaces that are almost competing with each other, despite the difference in size. I don't like the "Romay Sale" typeface for this logo. Use one stylized font, and keep the other one simple and unexpressive. I'd also loose the chimney on the house and the three periods before the word discover. It's a good idea that I've seen done before ... start reducing and see what you come up with.

I agree with kimBliSS. But i like the "Romay Sale" font, try to change the bottom line font (cause it will be always the small type) to a sans serif font.

it's been done before but it's clean and safe. change the typography, i agree with above comments

I agree with KimBliss she said everything...
I am "iffy" on the Romay Sale... It looks a little off to me?
and maybe try a version taking out the space under the romay sales bring the line closer to the name?
Very Nice start.

I agree with the space under the name, and I would simplify the line around the chimney to join the roof line at the bottom end. But in general, not bad.

Work on the typography, that will make or break this logo.