Brief from client
Hi Guys,
I've posted earlier design attempt of my personal project to rebrand the seatwave logo (online marketplace for selling and buying tickets). I gave it a go with a ticket perforation and the wave. I quite like the idea, but I think it isn't still strong enough. Thanks
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Much better. I wish I could see the other versions to the side for comparison, though.
The issue I have is the negative space here. The wave particles are cutting into the ticket just like it does at the top, so it loses the visual. Maybe to resolve this, try turning it sideways, so the particles will meet at the cut-out shape, where it would be anyways? I hope this makes sense.
Great improvements.
Thanks for your feedback xTheKillswitch. Maybe it would be just a matter of changing the ticket orientation to horizontal?
I think if you tried to turn it and use the perforations as Killy said then the dots might end up too far apart. I think what you have works well enough.
It's worth experimenting with. I'm not afraid to be proven wrong, here :)