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Second
linadh | Wed, 12/07/2011 - 17:16
Brief from client
It's my first design
2nd to describe secondhand.
Make your own style is my business tagline.
You may want to go ahead and hire somebody if you are designing for your business. Especially if opening day is waiting for your logo. Sorry- long way to go.
Think about the places you are going to glue your logo: your website, business card, letterhead, invoices, etc. How does it look?
The "2nd" is a good start and the tagline is too small. Move the "nd" to the baseline of the "2", then divide the tagline in three parts and move it to the right. Let's see what happens.
7 Comments
No idea, bevel effect is not good, typo is too small. Start over fresh with a completely new idea.
I'm not professional designer but thx for your critique. I'll learn more and more everyday.
Ouch, it really doesn't look good.
Back to reading books on graphic and logo design.
Come back with a new submission when you feel you are ready.
You may want to go ahead and hire somebody if you are designing for your business. Especially if opening day is waiting for your logo. Sorry- long way to go.
Keep at it though : )-
Think about the places you are going to glue your logo: your website, business card, letterhead, invoices, etc. How does it look?
The "2nd" is a good start and the tagline is too small. Move the "nd" to the baseline of the "2", then divide the tagline in three parts and move it to the right. Let's see what happens.
The "2nd" is a good start, but there is room improvement. Try using colour to bring life to your idea.
I didnt get this at all.... til i looked at what you wrote. its a mess, but good try. :)