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Self promo logo

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Personal logo as a designer

Just trying to design my personal logo..playing around looking for opinions.

Cheers

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botw's picture
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At first I didn't like it, but the more I look at it the more interesting and cool it becomes. There are only three smaller things I would reconsider. There are some loose sharp ends around the bottom of the symbol. Maybe you could simplify them, and the second the typeface is too close to the symbol. Perhaps you want to give it a bit more breathing space. Same applies to the stars. They are too close and their spacing is uneven.

boyd669's picture
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Cheers for the review. will make sure to make the changes. Would it be ok if i post here the business card i did and you tell me what you think?

botw's picture
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We mean to focus on logo designs only. But you can post the card if it's mainly the logo that's meant to be reviewed. Like this: http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/critique/logo-design-critique

boyd669's picture
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oh i didn't meant like in a new alone post..i was gonna just add it to this same conversation..its all good. cheers again

G13Design's picture
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It looks like you came down and crushed the Paramount logo... which isn't a bad thing. I think it's good, except it does all need a bit more space (as said above). And, the centering is off. So, just clean it up and it will work.

boyd669's picture
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Thanks for the review. You are right about paramount, to all honesty, didn't even realize it until i finish it and showed my friend and he said what you did...paramount....will take care of changes.

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Nice retro look. I like it although it needs some serious cleaning up.
Stars spacing is odd and they really make logo too busy, also get rid of the spikes at the bottom of the graphic mark, especially that one pointing at the top of the 'L'

boyd669's picture
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Cheers..will do!

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me gusta este logo, lo que se ve un poco mal es que tenga la misma tipografia en la linea de arriba como en la linea de abajo, y las estrellas desiguales en espacio, felicidades de todos modos

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I like the idea, but the interlocking bevels don't work for me. It's too much to try interpret at once. I also don't care for the name type. it's very stylistic and detracts from the logo which has a completely different style.

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