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SEO Bandwagon
keepkalm | Tue, 04/05/2016 - 01:10
Brief from client
This is an updated version of our old logo. Cleaned up, with the Expletus Font we are using on our website.
The wings aren't vector. Big no no. This looks like you found a raster image of the wings and slapped text onto it. Since they are raster I'm suspecting that you didn't draw them and you logo should never contain something you didn't create yourself. I'm not opposed to the font or the colors necessarily but you can't skip the creative process and expect solid results. The pun and wings aren't immediately an offense. Lots of places do it but make sure you nail the execution and you can have a pretty fun and memorable product. You can even play with this idea more but get back to paper first and make sure it is comprised solely of your own work.
The REO Speedwagon pun is so corny, I actually love it =)
Other than that, the wings look very well like a clip art, which you should avoid at all cost. The word mark is badly placed as it is way too close from the said wings.
Now, if you're not a designer and you managed to come up with this, congrats, because it's not looking totally awful. In fact a couple of tweaks should get right.
If you are a designer, this is awful!! =) Make sure that your logo is 100% vector, not pixel-based clip art crap!
4 Comments
SEO Bandwagon with wings...REO Speedwagon with wings. Not very original
My thoughts exactly!
The wings aren't vector. Big no no. This looks like you found a raster image of the wings and slapped text onto it. Since they are raster I'm suspecting that you didn't draw them and you logo should never contain something you didn't create yourself. I'm not opposed to the font or the colors necessarily but you can't skip the creative process and expect solid results. The pun and wings aren't immediately an offense. Lots of places do it but make sure you nail the execution and you can have a pretty fun and memorable product. You can even play with this idea more but get back to paper first and make sure it is comprised solely of your own work.
Good luck to you and keep posting.
The REO Speedwagon pun is so corny, I actually love it =)
Other than that, the wings look very well like a clip art, which you should avoid at all cost. The word mark is badly placed as it is way too close from the said wings.
Now, if you're not a designer and you managed to come up with this, congrats, because it's not looking totally awful. In fact a couple of tweaks should get right.
If you are a designer, this is awful!! =) Make sure that your logo is 100% vector, not pixel-based clip art crap!