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pitagoras | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 16:40

Brief from client 

LOGO CON LETRAS

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Cesardesign18 | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 17:56
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I do not understand why use effects to a logo. Besides this it seems made in less than ten minutes.
Why (CA) has a different orientation to the other texts ?.
I would like to see at least one symbol, I see a lot of text and no imagination, I recommend pencil and paper and return to the drawing board.

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pitagoras | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 18:51

AND LIKE THIS?

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Shawali | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 19:02

This is definitely way better than the other one, which is terrible. Post this on as a new version.

Also, you do not need to scream, we can read you fine =)

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pitagoras | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 19:11

sorry is not a scream jejeje

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Cesardesign18 | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 19:05
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If you have improved a lot.

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pitagoras | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 19:11

what u recomend me

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glitchmunki | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 21:27
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Hey pitagoras. Overall I think the negative feedback is because there's a lot going in the logo overall;

Different sized type in the main logotype
Two different colors in the logo
Various bits of iconography here and there

I think if you maybe focused on the type first by removing the icons you'd see a big improvement. I'm not keen on the colours either, but that's personal taste. Why not try out in greyscale first?

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CAMOBAP | Wed, 06/10/2015 - 21:48

Pitagoras, I would outline that element that coming out on an outer part with a bit thicker line to make it" Q " more confirmative. Also, as an idea that hits me by looking at your project - why not make all bottom portions of your letters into these lines from a ruler and you can even make that in orange to solidify the whole concept idea. Just a thought that I have to make it more interesting and intriguing. Good luck!

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