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Cool idea but it needs reworking I think. The lightbulb needs redrawing, if you're going try pull something like this off as your own logo the illustration will have to be perfect. At the moment it's looking a little cliparty and rough. Also I don't think you should let the symbol interfere with the text so much, it's to imposing between the words, try having it to one side. The font is pretty poor, looks a bit amateur, pick something slicker. This needs some colour because this greyscale scheme isn't working, makes it look quiet drab.
this is too pale the execution is poor, pay attention to the kerning.over all not working for me sorry.back to your drawing board draw as many as you can and pick the best then present again.
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Cool idea but it needs reworking I think. The lightbulb needs redrawing, if you're going try pull something like this off as your own logo the illustration will have to be perfect. At the moment it's looking a little cliparty and rough. Also I don't think you should let the symbol interfere with the text so much, it's to imposing between the words, try having it to one side. The font is pretty poor, looks a bit amateur, pick something slicker. This needs some colour because this greyscale scheme isn't working, makes it look quiet drab.
Choose a different font
Instead of a light bulb why not have the shark swimming in an ink well
Then try different positioning, the symbol being between the words is not working
this is too pale the execution is poor, pay attention to the kerning.over all not working for me sorry.back to your drawing board draw as many as you can and pick the best then present again.
Like the idea!
My opinion is: simplify the bulb, for example like this:
http://image.shutterstock.com/display_pic_with_logo/384199/384199,125079...
And agree with Josh, choose another font.