SirOrin Nature Photography

Vanessa, I have a question : Sir Orin or Sirorin - what is the photographer's last name? I like your subtext and I wouldn't change that - great job! Don't like two shades of green. Snake looks forced into a circle... Try to find a solution for a cleaner easier composition of the snake/circle in a center. I think if you would bend a snake's neck from a top center point of a circle down a bit and made an indication or a tail from the other part of a circle - that might very well be the answer that you're looking for. I can , also, see a variation with a snake being bend from a top of a circle to a sunset inside " O "... Good luck to you, get it done!

I agree with Félix. It reads Sir Orin and that snake seems forced. Again, I would ditch the subtext for now. You can have a version of your logo with it, but don't make it integral of the logo. I would lower the O, so it's horizontally aligned with the other characters.

I may have been the sole voice in favor of the previous vereion, but i still believe it was stronger. I like the font choice here, don't like the name broken into 2 colors unless it is 2 names, I do like the colors though. Still i like the lens/sunset effect in the previous version much better and would still advise ditching the snake altogether. Unless all the photographer does is take pictures of snakes, if thats the case get your money up front..

Ona funnier side note, I once worked for a pretty big newspaper whose ediior was deathly afraid of snakes and would fire anyone on the spot who put a picture or illustration of a snake in the paper.

It is supposed to read as two different words, "sir" and "orin". That's the reason I put them in two different colors. He wanted them close together, but discernible. I think if I left the subtext out, it might be hard to tell exactly what the business offers.
also he is definitely a big snake fan, loves to take pictures of them when he can. Recently he intentionally got bitten by one, so he could take pictures of his bleeding hand or show off, or I don't know. He's a bit reckless. :)

Will " snaketure photography " work in a subtext? Sir and Orin then needs a breathing space in order to be having a reading sense. I still believe if you can make a hanging down snake from upper portion of " O " and make inside of it a sunset background - it would be a very cool resolution for your symbol that will represent two topics that Sir Orin does in general. Good luck.