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Spinnacer

Brief from client 

Having fun with my logo ;)

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spinnacer's picture
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Hate the people that only vote without saying nothing ¬_¬

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I think its too complicated - many parts, especially line shape in the middle is disturbing. Also "computer graphics" font doesnt fit to main lettering, main font is higher. I would try to make the main logo from the lowest possible amount of pixels. Hope it helps

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I'll definitely say something while giving a vote, but I'm not sure you'll like what I have to say!?

None of this works for me. The font you've chosen brings to mind ancient 80's graphics (not sure if that's what you'd want your logo to elicit, especially given that you're making computer graphics?), the font is also very hard to read, I'm not sure why "spin" is an off-white color instead of just being white, I don't see why there's a period after the main text, the subtext looks like it's just kind of hanging out and I'm not a fan of the condensed font that you've used for it, and lastly- the cursor being in between the two main words... Why!? As far as my eyes are concerned it's just muddling and confusing everything else.

Overall I'd say you should start over with a more cohesive idea- something that will make people take notice in a good way and want you to do stuff for them. I'm not trying to be a jerk but I'd take one look at this logo and walk the other direction. Maybe sit down with a pen and paper, see what you get!?!

spinnacer's picture
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wooow relax mom is not really my "forever" logo and not my "present" logo, definitely not yours :) thats because it's written "For fun" up there :p. i just waned to experiment something new. Anyway thanks for the Comment made.
Some observations are exact but the concept is started from a selected text to give the idea of the continuity of editing, of the typography change, creation, showing up an regenerated old graphic in a new one, and of course the return of new one to the old. that's why I chose that font type programming language, like the first font builded for pc language (and as much as i know about graphic design story that font does not belong to the old 80's neither at the new, and its not so hard to read, try print it even in a small size) maybe i should find another character for the other part of main tittle to give the idea (or maybe non work at all :P)
and then move on to the character below (which is not condensed, but regular) show that transition that i explain up,
You're right, it's not balanced well with the main title, but it can be adjusted (just e little patient). For the cursor I think so too, better remove. I wanted to emphasize the black area not as simple black square but as a selected part of the text.
however thanks again for the opinion and hope i'v bean clear with my modest english :P

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