Stephen Fitzgerald - Graphic Designer

hmmm not sure about that symbol, its hard to tell that its meant to be a S and F. the text is fine but nothing special there.. im also not sure whether you want graphic designer to be bigger than your name either

the 'SF' logo is ok as a concept, and I had no trouble identifying the letters and why they are there - but it doesn't pair well with the type, which doesn't pair well with itself. not sure it makes sense to make graphic designer so much larger than your name, nor that it makes sense to aim for 'simple and clean' - that's kind of obvious.

i would definitely take more time with it, push it further and look harder for more interesting type that is more harmonious with the symbol. and at the same time, i would try some other symbol options that also work in the SF, if that's the direction you definitely want to go.

I like the SF icon. I might play around with some more variations of it but overall it looks good. The only thing that I would say definitely needs attention is "Graphic Designer" is way too big. It definitely shouldn't be larger than your name. I would make it half the size it is or even eliminate it entirely and make your name larger or on 2 lines. Looking good.