Submarine Sky
Costantino Rover | Sat, 12/19/2015 - 15:30
Brief from client
This is an idea for my next cartoon episodes based on a situation comedy ambiented on the beach.
I'm submitting only a sketch
I tried to create a kind of script a little vintage and a little Jacovitti styled.
The cartoon episodes or stripes are ambiented in shining island in the middle of the ocean.
Lot of comical situations on it.
7 Comments
There's a lot going on here, for sure. I would consider refining your first word..."Jub?" And why the alien eyes floating above it? I guess I don't fully understand the nature of this logo, which raises concern.
Hi the logo is SUBMARINE SKY
The 3 eyes are tipical of the characters used in the cartoon.
I alteady don't like it anymore...
I'm quite liking where this is going. But the three eyes thing just looks like it has to be there and doesn't feel fully integral to the design.
Nice job on the lettering!
I upgraded a little...
In this version I made everything a little more smiling. The "S" is more similar to a tongue that slurps. The letter "U" reprises a mouth very close to the look of some characters of the cartoon. Made in this way is better than from the beginning but I'm afraid that I'm going too much near to children language. The cartoon is for adults.
I'm not sure that the word "marine" is working fine...
Meh, I'm not a fan of the new versions. They seem too complicated.
BTW, instead of posting your new iterations in the comment section, create a new version. This post is already on page 2, aka "the page where no one ever goes" =)