Suburban Tees and Sports
gapipkin | Wed, 02/01/2012 - 07:23
Brief from client
This is a logo I created for my tee shirt company.
My target audience is football dads and soccer moms in the suburbs of Chicago.
I used the clolors of the Chicago Bears, my favorite football team.
5 Comments
the logo is tooooooo crowded, the symbol should be a little bit away from the typo, try to put your work in a block to fix consistency..
the tagline should be "be different." only, no need to add website or if you're going to apply this logo on other offline channels better put in one line,
one more thing, reconsider the use of colors (i like them) but we use colors to slightly differentiate title, secondary title & tagline from each other
Yippeee, it's a happy teen stickman made out of hexagons with a typography that looks pretty out of place here. And you have a 'TM' there too, lmao.
A lot of things cluttered in the same place. A graphic mark, a wordmark, a tagline, another tagline (or motto), and a web address, all of them use the same font.
Nice colors, though.
Looks very cluttered.. Any type of stick figure is over done at this point in logo design. It contradicts the slogan. Which by the way is a little too close to Apple's.. so it is also contradictory :.
waaaaay too much going on....simplify it