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the third revision

Brief from client 

no brief in fact. Is about the thing i fear the most: the third revision and a dedication for all fellows designers that fear it also

just doodling but critique is very welocome

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CAMOBAP's picture
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I like this one in general, but... Keep the " T's " and " h's " identical and leave that " d " at the end solid, do not play with stem.I would shift " REVISION " to the left and placed below " The " and blend that curve from " T " from " Third " into a " v ". Why a second part of a text in an upper case?

hueroth's picture
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thanks camobap for all the useful feedback. Is a joke, like a trailer of a movie for example "this summer" or "coming soon", thinking about this i could not help writhing this even knowing it is not fit. About the nonidentical stuff, i do this often, sometimes it gets very nice sometimes i screw them up.....

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