Tiburones de AGS
Valhall | Sat, 06/07/2014 - 00:43
Brief from client
I made this just for fun, I used to play water polo, and that was the name of our team, tell me what you think and how can I improve it. Cheers to all. (This is not spam, I'm afraid of the Spam Police, jajaja)
3 Comments
So in general it's a good idea and I like the general layout, but the illustration needs work to make it more elegant.
I like this but it's not done yet.
Two main things that bugs me: the word mark is totally overpowered by the symbol. And there are too many strokes of different thickness. You need to homogenize the whole thing.
Other than that, I like where this is going.
Keep it up.
You are almost there. You need to work on colors (brightness), the whole thing is too dark. And make "tiburones" more contrast to back layout.
Also i would recommend you to simplycify eyes a bit. And cracks on "tiburones".
Good job.