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Tryst

kritiks | Wed, 11/02/2011 - 11:30

Brief from client 

This is again college work. I wanted a fashion brand dealing with the theme of rediscovering yourself and the different moods. the name is Tryst because it means a secret meeting with yourself.

I am not happy with the look as I was going for optical illusion effect but I dnt think I got there,...feedback please.

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Qneberg | Thu, 11/03/2011 - 00:09
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When I more distant readability is equal to zero. May be change the font? more bold.

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botw | Thu, 11/03/2011 - 02:45
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I don't understand the idea even with a brief. It's too complicated for the average person. I like the uniqueness of the symbol, but it's hard to read. Change the font.

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jparker800 | Tue, 11/08/2011 - 23:18
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WOW!

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splashster | Wed, 11/09/2011 - 23:58
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Rediscovering yourself is a tough job.
This logo makes it impossible.
Rule of thumb - your logo needs to be legible in color, b&w and at minimal size of 1 inch or 2,5 cm.
Scrap this and start over.

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Bella13 | Tue, 12/13/2011 - 12:26

You need to start thinking about how you going to use this in the production world. Not just look good on paper, but on various design/signage elements.

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