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Vinho
Bassam Hassan Zoghbi | Mon, 01/09/2012 - 16:10
Brief from client
wine
Red wine.
Well, my instructor said it was time to leave a good bit of the label.
Not sure what the logo consists of here, is it just the typography Barilfarto? I like the idea of the meandering swirls but I think it could be executed better. The 3d vector of the wine bottle doesn't suit the style of this iamge either, perhaps a flat colour silouette of a wine bottle would work better. If the bottle is simply for illustration purpose then you can disregard those comments.
ow sorry but I do not think it's only because the site is the emphasis of the English language that I will necessarily write the title logo in English, Arabic logos seen and not seen the critical type.
I don't see anything very creative or memorable here, just some stock flourishes and stock wine glass on a stock torn paper label. Typography is poor and the complete thing looks pretty cheesy.
On a side note, flourishes that you used will terribly complicate label production and make it extremely costly and I don't think the quality of this label can justify the extra production costs.
Bueno, no se si la botella en si sea el logo, o solo estas presentando el diseño de la etiqueta, Me gusta la palabra Barrilfarto anexandole la copa y el vino que estan abajo, en menor tamaño, Saludos
Forgetting that this isn't a logo I will critique it on what it is which is product design. Apologies but fundamentally this wouldn't go into production due to the over elaborate design that consumes the bottle due to cost... unless this is a very expensive bottle! There is a reason why most wine bottles have. Design wise it isn't working hard enough for me, look at existing creative executions and how you can improve. Good luck.
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Not sure what the logo consists of here, is it just the typography Barilfarto? I like the idea of the meandering swirls but I think it could be executed better. The 3d vector of the wine bottle doesn't suit the style of this iamge either, perhaps a flat colour silouette of a wine bottle would work better. If the bottle is simply for illustration purpose then you can disregard those comments.
this isn't a product packaging site
agreed
The only part you can take from the whole illustration is the part that says "BARRILFARTO". That might look like a logo.
Nothing to do with the design-
But, what a horrible name for a wine... Barrel Fart..???
ow sorry but I do not think it's only because the site is the emphasis of the English language that I will necessarily write the title logo in English, Arabic logos seen and not seen the critical type.
It was a joke :)
smoothly Brands of the worlds is for it anyway:) can comment on good
I don't see anything very creative or memorable here, just some stock flourishes and stock wine glass on a stock torn paper label. Typography is poor and the complete thing looks pretty cheesy.
On a side note, flourishes that you used will terribly complicate label production and make it extremely costly and I don't think the quality of this label can justify the extra production costs.
Bueno, no se si la botella en si sea el logo, o solo estas presentando el diseño de la etiqueta, Me gusta la palabra Barrilfarto anexandole la copa y el vino que estan abajo, en menor tamaño, Saludos
Forgetting that this isn't a logo I will critique it on what it is which is product design. Apologies but fundamentally this wouldn't go into production due to the over elaborate design that consumes the bottle due to cost... unless this is a very expensive bottle! There is a reason why most wine bottles have. Design wise it isn't working hard enough for me, look at existing creative executions and how you can improve. Good luck.
Nice label... bad logo.