what you think?

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does not seem happy, that smile is like the Happy Meal from McDonalds and the gradient is not nice, the typography is good but not edge or gradient would be easier to read

Font choice is poor

Loose gradients

Color choice is poor

the coffee cup is just awkward in it's self

i like the font, but they are not properly merged, if customer wants to cut that logo will have a headache.

don't like the gradient, a plain color would be nicer.

the color schema is ok, but try different shades of orange/brown.

work a bit more on the details, i can see where the objects has been unified.

the lights / shadows looks a bit off.

it's a nice idea, but not well performed (soemtimes happends to me)

Oh boy, idea has merit but your composition and execution failed.
Colors are too saturated and too close together to provide a good contrast.
You filled everything with double/triple strokes and this is definitely creating a total mess, especially when typography is concerned.
How about you take a step back and start reducing unnecessary things to get a cleaner image?

different font and more work on the cup and you have a good logo.

The idea is challenging but poorly executed here.

The cup looks like a mask with a handle and some curly hair.

I cannot read the text

Take it down to one color and see where you stand.

Thanks Guys,
I am beginner and I am very grateful for the tips
and I intend to run them.

Obrigado Galera,
sou iniciante e agradeço muito pelas dicas
e pretendo executa-las

Xun22 a idéia está boa. Como falei mais em cima eu apenas tentaria fazer a uma cor, sem os contrastes e procuraria aproximar mais as letras, pois se for preciso usar em corte, vais ter um problema. Continua o bom trabalho.