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wine girl
datenshi_blue | Wed, 05/25/2016 - 14:55
Brief from client
This logo has good idea please work on it more because We feel the logo is aesthetically not good enough
This does not work for me. And the second version is worse! It looks like you are highlighting a larger females bladder, and since the glass essentially makes 2 feet at the bottom- she has one boob that is flying off in the wind!!!
For this to be Wine Girl drinks and fun your logo is a bit to sexual in nature, and there is no "fun" in it. If females are your target market, you need to think about what appeals to females!
Sorry but for me this is a scratch and start again. Good luck!
oh, well I assumed by the name "wine girl" your target was females. Either way, it needs more work- for me, its mostly the way you display the wine in the glass.
The symbol looks half-assed (no pun intended), as if made directly on the computer in 2 min. It looks very poorly though through, without any sketching behind it.
As Joy aptly pointed out, you have a strategy problem here. "Wine girl" made me thing straight up of a bar aimed at women. Definitely not men. And as a man myself, the symbol of a faux sexy women curves isn't attractive at all.
Also, and that's just me being a bloody social justice warrior, the whole concept feels a bit sexist and not really mature.
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This does not work for me. And the second version is worse! It looks like you are highlighting a larger females bladder, and since the glass essentially makes 2 feet at the bottom- she has one boob that is flying off in the wind!!!
For this to be Wine Girl drinks and fun your logo is a bit to sexual in nature, and there is no "fun" in it. If females are your target market, you need to think about what appeals to females!
Sorry but for me this is a scratch and start again. Good luck!
the target are males, bar
oh, well I assumed by the name "wine girl" your target was females. Either way, it needs more work- for me, its mostly the way you display the wine in the glass.
This really not working for me, unfortunately.
The symbol looks half-assed (no pun intended), as if made directly on the computer in 2 min. It looks very poorly though through, without any sketching behind it.
As Joy aptly pointed out, you have a strategy problem here. "Wine girl" made me thing straight up of a bar aimed at women. Definitely not men. And as a man myself, the symbol of a faux sexy women curves isn't attractive at all.
Also, and that's just me being a bloody social justice warrior, the whole concept feels a bit sexist and not really mature.
This is one fat lady ;)
how about thinner glass lines, and put that lady in better shape :)?
Typography is good, maybe just make drinks and fun same width as wine girl, estetic reasons.
♪ Big Girl you are beautiful! ♪
♪ Fat girl, where does your neck begin? ♪
Should not drink during pregnancy.
On the second version;
I saw a lips stick kiss mark on a glass for half a second, without breast.
That I would like as a wine drinker myself.