Diem Dental #2
rrgelder | Wed, 08/19/2015 - 23:35
Brief from client
Second version of the first logo I uploaded under this name, which one is better? I like this one.
I updated the logo a bit, I think it looks better, but it might still be missing something.
1 Comments
I would go back and re-read some of the comments on your previous uploads of this logo. The tooth placed oddly ontop of the D just is not working. My brain keeps trying to figure out what the function of it is in that placement....like is it floating, is it attached to the front of the stem of the D, does the D stop and then a tooth is stacked on and then the D starts again? It just doesn't seem to make sense put there. Multiple people suggested making the cutout in the center of D a tooth shape to fix this problem. If you're not wanting to do that then experiment a little more, but as it is right now that symbol is odd and not working. The font seems simple and fine to me. The darker green helps to not be so electric. Play around with using that tooth in different ways with the D.