FK Omasnica
Brief from client
Football Club Omasnica
FC Omasnica crest
Crest of a football club from Serbia that represents three villages - two of them named after a blacksmith workshop that was actually the foundation of the villages in medieval period, which are represented by the sword, and one, smaller, that was named after a pigeon and represented by the pigeon in flight on the crest. Of course, other than the name symbolism, sword and pigeon also form the balance between war and peace (battle during the football match and friendship after it's over).
The symmetrical play of blue and white fields is enriched with red elements carefully placed on the handle of the sword to form the Serbian flag in all directions (horizontal - left to right and right to left and vertical - downwards and upwards). Again, this symbolism is ambiguous, because these red elements remind of rubies that used to be placed on medieval swords, but can also be perceived as the color of the wine, which is one of the most important products of the area the club is based in.
14 Comments
First of all use the ball that was common in 1976. Try the Telstar.
Then, I think it would be a good idea to use some heraldic figures to represent the 3 villages with equal importance. So I would like to see 2 swords and 1 pigeon.
2.5 feet away from the 20" monitor and I almost don't see the red elements in your logo. I would use the red more generously.
Instead of the "FKO" put the whole thing: "FK Omasnica" (in the Serbian alphabet, of course) around the circle.
By the way, your logo reminds me of this:
nice picture lol
I'll take your advice about the Telstar ball. Good idea.
Red elements are suppose to be only details.
Tried the club's name in the circle, but it doesn't look very good.
Thank you.
with a little more work and clean it up i think you will be fine
Sorry but I don't think this can work.
Football club's logos evolved over time, yes, most of them are still cheesy (with a few exceptions) but at least they are all well executed.
This is what a non-helpful critique looks like.
Coming from a guy with such terrible logo design I won't mind it at all.
Thanks for writing.
This comment of yours just provided an invaluable insight into your psyche, lol.
You are more then welcome to post more comments like this. :)
I don't know why you bothered to comment at all. Your comment doesn't include any advice or at least a well-intended criticism, so it's absolutely useless.
Maybe it's Serbian flag that pokes your eyes or the lack of your designing skills (I've seen your diletant work).
My comment is pretty self-explanatory, if you did not get the clear message then the problem probably lies in your low IQ.
Judging by your feeble attempts to insult me it could be an alpha macho with a low IQ problem too.
Your comment is pure sranje, derived from the several factors. Your level of hypocrisy is another fascinating thing. The only 'insult' I've writen to you so far is that your logo sucks (unlike you, I can explain why - lack of originality, terrible choice of company name - sounds like you pissed on someone and the logo has absolutely no referral to the name of the company, unless you consider dot a splash, which would show your failure to understand the meaning of 'splash'), while you constatly kept commenting about my 'psyche' and intelligence.
If everyone that has more talent than you is getting on your nerves, you should see a professional untill it's too late, my friend.
LOL
hilarious
aw better read how to critique......