Graphic Designer
yadusam | Tue, 10/08/2013 - 18:31
Brief from client
Hi, This is my logo for my freelance Graphic Design.
Hi, This is second version of my logo for my freelance Graphic Design. Thanks for your precious help. I did some changes in logo. Please give your opinion.
3 Comments
This is already a huge improvement from the first one for me, However it still is not doing it. The Y is skinnier than the rest of the font. maybe choose another font that is similar in wieght also the tag line make the g and d the same size as the rest its throwing it off.. and finally watch the kerning.
You might want to concentrate on refining the "Y" lines. The top curl of the "Y" looks disconnect from the letter rather than a flowing line intersected by the circle. The added cursive type doesn't really match the style of the "Y" and looks a bit out of place.
It's not working for either.
The connection between the Y and the rest of the name isn't happening.
The main font is cool. The subtext not so much.
The main problem with this logo is that there's no particular idea.
Good luck.