JustADone Logo
kaosme | Wed, 10/24/2012 - 12:40
Brief from client
A logo for my company. It will eventually become an advertising company. Until then it will make mobile apps. The drop signifies ink as well as water seeing as the company wants to promote eco-friendly solutions, like planting trees after using paper. Also the symbol is supposed to have a J+1 in it.
Uses:
-Web
-Stationary
-T-shirts
-etc.
Tried a different font and look. Not sure about it. I think it looks too stiff :))
13 Comments
about perfect in my opinion, lower the symbol a little to have the cut aligned with the bar and align complete solutions with justadone. Very nice font and colors.
I agree with hueroth. Congrats
Thanks. I just wanted to make it a bit less corporate. :)) But apparently i can't dodge that bullet. Maybe it's for the best. i'll still try some modifications.
PS: Hello Geracao. Glad to be back.
Mmmmm mmmm! Man that symbol looks good! Don't change a single thing about it :D
Your font choice is also great, doesn't look at all stiff to me and I like the colors.
Awesome revision, all thumbs up from me, and welcome back :3
Yeah, this looks great! There are two little things that I would change though (one really) - I would drop the line down juuuuust a little bit to give some breathing room between it and the main text, and then because of that adjustment I'd also (as hueroth suggested) nudge the symbol down a tad so that the break in the symbol is level with the line.
thanks for the comment. I already did that. I do final adjustments after i post sometimes. Just because i am eager. Either way. Thanks for the comment.
Kaosme - Great work! after you said you made that adjustment no more to be done here... Move along ;) lol
SPELL CHECK ANYONE??? Nice work Kaos.... but if this one got out approved
as is, you'd have some heavy duty explaining to do!!! :)
I'd love to give you a thumbs up for typography, but that to me, also means spelling and grammar. Sorry bud, can't do it! :p
My bad. Thanks for the notice. I changed it. Didn't really pay too much attention to the tag. :D Mostly because i might change it. Thanks anyway. You are right. :D
I like this better than the blue version for one reason, the colors. It's more advertising than that medical blue. However, I'm not happy with the choice of the font here, especially the Ad part. Also I don't like the line in the middle and the big gap in the bottom text. The symbol has the same disadvantages as I said for the other version, there are too many things stuffed in it.
Thanks for the critique Oscar. I know the font can be improved. The symbol however i like. All in all, people who don't want to look into it will only see a sort of water drop. For the company Carrefour I did not notice for 4-5 years that it represent a <C> ... i just thought it was 2 arrows. (It's made with negative space) But it's simple, does not look out of place and the important thing is what you do with it. I have to agree with you that I had a hard time to put a text on it (and still did not make it as well as i wanted to) :D
Ok. Here people already said all things I believe. Can you upload the 3d version? I mean with all the above mentioned improvements: 1) Solutions instead of sollutions, 2) Complete solutions down, more air to breathe, 3) Better line placement 4) Better line trace on the drop 5) And maybe better kerning for the main text in JustAdone. Still something is there that bothers the eye and says that it is something wrong with the symbol and types. Don't be discouraged. Sometimes I wake up grumpy, and sometimes I just let 'em sleep. :)
i like the symbol, but i dont like the typography, the font looks too common. I think the logo would look better if the symbol was placed on top of the text and made bigger, this will make it stand out more and will make the symbol way easier to see. I think your right to use a sans font but it just needs to be a nicer sans font! you dont need that line either just have a slightly bigger gap between the main text and sub text. A font i think might work well is DIN or Grotesk, i think they would match to your symbol well