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Label Clothing r2

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Label is a clothing and art company that will sell the best designs on the best fabric for the best prices. Many releases will be highly limited editions.

I am pretty happy with this version. Thoughts? Anything I should change?

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xKillswitch's picture
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I see this as an alternate version, rather than a potential replacement (an app icon, for example).

Weren't you planning on modifying the icon to be more "L" like?

unterm rad's picture
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I feel like the angles of the letters should fit better with the symbol. They don't lean the same way.

xKillswitch's picture
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Although be careful here. That's a REALLY strong italic slant. I'd probably compromise and lean the letters a bit as well as the overall slant of the shape.

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i second this, it's irritates in the back of the head when the angles do not line up.

JNF Design's picture
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Thanks for the comments, I'm not sure I want to associate all too much with the letter L as I see it as having negative connotations. That is why I am fine with the symbol staying a bit more abstract.

As for the angles, I think I had tried to make them parallel to the symbol but pulled them back a bit because it felt more naturally in perspective to me. The lines would appear to come together as they recede up the incline if it was 3 dimensional.

I appreciate the feedback, I will continue to experiment; I think am close!

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I'm not sure how I feel about the font choice. Is the company a outdoor hiking thing (nature and stuff) or do they want to appeal to sporty, climbing, adventures people?

I feel like the font is somewhat blend and to me it's not targeting none of the above. I like the thin font you have on the first version of this "bundle" as this would do well in the sporty segment I think.

JNF Design's picture
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Label is a clothing company I am creating. The target is adventurous young people, but I wan't it to be wearable by a wide audience and be wearable in any setting. The idea is to make really high quality design and fabric, without sacrificing cost.

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