My logotipe
axelh | Wed, 02/19/2014 - 23:46
Brief from client
first proposal, for my own logo
I decided to throw away the first to present them, he considered that he had no future, at least for me and I decided to do a simpler new.
Try to take many of his tips and apply this logo
What you think of this proposal?
Thanks for everything, I hope I have improved a little. hehehehe
14 Comments
I like the symbol, but I must say you should make the A sharp is the G bottom. Also, the font does not match quite well with the symbol. I guess you should find a more appropriate one. And that line between the text doesn't look good, at least make it the same length as main text... or just remove it. :)
Allie_S Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it. :D
I like where this symbol is going. I'd say to make the connection of the A and G match the shape of the point on the top left of the G so you get better symmetry.
I would also lose the horizontal line. It's not really adding anything so you can simplify there.
Make some observations from Allie_S and JonAtkinson.
What now say about the logo?
Thanks for everything
This is looking good, but the symbol needs some more work. I would have the A round like the G.
Other than that, you're on the right track. Good job.
Wow! That's what I'm talking about! See how much stronger your overall piece is when you take the time out on developing a symbol? Looks great :D
I also agree with shawali on your G, the top part is too flat in terms of how it should be flowing with your A. See my sketch below.
For me it looks fine both with and without the line between the subtext, your piece is strong either way :3
Note: You can also make it into a sort of abstract pencil like I did on the bottom iteration. This is not necessary but I was having a little fun with it and thought I'd show you lol.
Keep at it!
You are nailing these critiques lately! :)
that was the main idea I had, place the symbol as a pencil, only the tip would be G.
but in the end I decided to leave, as in the previous proposal.
:D
Following his advice, come to this result.
Changing the symmetry of the A to be equal to the G
What do you think?
I like this a lot better but I think the right side is bowed out farther the left a bit. Could just be my eyes messing with me. Either way, the curved A nails it.
It's better, but I think you can get more symmetry.
Here's the kind of thing I mean.
This.
Indeed.