My own company (OBVS). Providing affordable branding for small companies. Forget any acronym. I want bright unusual colours - sick of red logos.
What is the meaning of the orange dot inside 'o' and small orange square at the bottom of 'b' (it makes 'b' look crippled), I don't understand it?
OBVS acronym is very poorly executed, letters have different thickness and are not aligned properly (look at the bottom of V&S). How will people know your company name is Original Brands by Vicky Schinkel, only by acronym?
Sorry, you need to go back to the drawing board.
Always simplify when possible. Extraneous doo-dads, blinding colors, mixing of fonts.. etc. They all take away from , rather than add to a design, especially logo design. Too much text in general. Sorry, you need to settle this one down a bit.
It's very busy I agree. Needs an idea first of all.
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