Pathway DTP
jarrad113@gmail.com | Sun, 11/30/2014 - 16:25
Brief from client
Starting a design/printing company. I will subcontract some printing and offer dtg on site. I put this together so I can start a FB page and web site as I need to start doing business.
I value this community and the insight offered so please let me know what you think. ..
The feedback was if nothing else convincing.
Hope I can get a little better feedback on rnd 2. . .
Thanks for your time
3 Comments
There is too much going on here. Personally, I don't like gradients, and especially not with these colors. I liked the typography more on version 1, and the word "TO is a bit smaller than the other words. You don't need to make it so complicated :)
Again, it kinda baffles me that you want to start a design company while you obviously don't know the first thing about logo design.
Bad news is you're not ready to come up with a professional level logo. Good news is that you're just at the beginning of your journey. Just do first things first: learn and work your ass off.
Pro tip: never ever use random gradients on a font, let alone of strokes.
Good luck.
Unless you're making a logo for a movie producer. Those guys loveee gradients on strokes.