PIMENTA ROSA STORE
Brief from client
The pink pepper shop is a women's clothing store.
I want something simple and remarkable!
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A pimenta rosa loja é uma loja de roupas femininas. Quero algo simples e marcante!
The brand was created with inspiration in the pink pepper fruit that is derived from the Aroeira tree. From colors to shapes.
It will still be created a testo of inspiration to present to the client but I would like to hear from you all first hand.
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A marca foi criada com inspiração no fruto pimenta rosa que é derivado da arvore Aroeira. Desde cores a formas.
Ainda será criado um testo de inspiração para apresentar ao cliente porém gostaria da opinião de vocês todos em primeira mão.
6 Comments
Pink pepper fruit for friends you do not know.
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Fruto pimenta rosa para os amigos (as) que não conhecem.
So, I really like the stylized feel that you're going for with this.
What I find unfortunate is that you can automatically tell that this very organic typography is a font. The "a" at the end of both words is very distracting. I also don't enjoy the sub font, which I think is a big disconnect.
I would definitely tweak this to look more hand done, to make your logo special.
I actually like that your little pimento resembles a heart however, that's quite cute.
Thank you Friend, your review was very helpful to me, I loved the suggestions. I'm already working on these changes, I believe I agree with all of them and we'll see how it will all be after the changes.
- I really like the sub source, I think it's cool, but now seeing with different eyes, I'll look for some more harmonic.
- Yes, the symbol besides passing the image of the "Pink Pepper" symbol conveys a feeling of love being intentionally similar to a heart. : D
I apologize for the translation to the iglês, I believe it should be pith.
I also very much appreciate you putting this in both English and Spanish.
So I will award you the same courtesy. I do apologize for the horrible translation grammar.
Por lo tanto, me gusta mucho la sensación estilizada que usted está buscando.
Lo que encuentro desafortunado es que usted puede decir automáticamente que esta tipografía muy orgánica es una fuente. El "a" al final de ambas palabras es muy distractivo. También no disfruto de la fuente sub, que creo que es una gran desconexión.
Definitivamente ajustaría esto para ver más hecho a mano, para hacer su logotipo especial.
De hecho, me gusta que su pequeño pimiento se asemeja a un corazón sin embargo, eso es bastante lindo.
I agree with everything stated above- the subfont definitely needs to change. The colors and symbol are great. I'd tweak one letter A so it looks more hand made. And put a bit of space between the P and the i - its a little too close compared to other letter spacing. Overall this is pretty nice work!
Thank you friend for your criticism and evaluation, it will also be of great importance for sure. I will implement your changes, I also fully agree, it's good to see your work with other eyes, maybe it's those missing details. Soon I will be posting the suggested changes. Thank you.