Good Change? Bad?
could use a little help here......
If there isn't a reason for the black V in SAVAGE, I would lose it. I'm working on something... I'll be back with more later.
yea there is no real reason for it. Just thought it need a little color down the chain a bit. But it does make the v stand out to much.
The text is too close to the symbol, otherwise it looks interesting. Even if I have no idea what's it for. :)
Love the design. The only thing I would do is space the letters in the word Savage evenly and line up the the 'n' in design with the 'e' in savage. Do not change the color of the 'v' in savage. It looks great.
As i.dandp said, the letters need to be cleaned up a bit, and I think the paint on the face could be revised to show the jaw line and the roundness at the top of the head.
similar to what you did to show the bottom lip and the outline of the nose.
Overall think its a really cool idea and could be tweaked to perfection.
Idea is decent. I feel that this is still just clipart next to type that is not set very well (Too much gap on either side of the "v").
When I think of savage, I tihnk fierce and strong. This gives me the feeling of neither. I liked the spartan concept better than this one. maybe play with the letter "S" and incorporate the helmet into it? Maybe the "v" becomes two spears? Maybe the tail of the "g" becomes a spear tip? Just some thoughts.
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