Spirit of Truth S.T.E.M. After School Sports Program
Brief from client
At the Spirit of Truth After school S.T.E.M. Sports Program our goal is to teach, enhance, and cultivate the mind, body, and soul of our participants through academic achievement at our After school Program and promoting healthy eating by providing nutritious snacks to tune their bodies for sports, fitness and participation.
Spirit of Truth is unique in that we not only offer a top notch After school Program with a focus on sports science but we also offer a top notch Athletics Program that offers: basketball, nfl youth flag football, wrestling, track, kickball, and cycling. Along with a highly qualified and motivated staff of coaches that have the experience and training to induce progress and production in our student-athletes.
Cleaned it up a little. Took out the grunge splatters. Utilized a heavy stroke instead. Added a basketball player and some books. Aligned, kerned, and tracked the type.
2 Comments
It looks better than your previous one. Maybe because of the alignment of the text which gives it a nice look. The M could be filled where it forms a gap. It looks a little off. Also the guy with the book on the left is out of order. It makes you want to put something on the right as well. But that makes it too crowded. I like that you put more sports and it makes the point. Also some good quality splashes would be good. Try it..if it does not work just give up the splashes. However it gives a more energetic feel to it. Young people want action from a sport.
PS: Also nice job with the very dark gray instead of black... looks better.
ok, nice job here but as kaosme said you need some adjustments, Splashes to go wilder, not too much , take out some elements that unbalance the symbol.