Oníricus

I prefer the script font you used in your first attempt but without the twisting effect.

I guess "oniricus" derives from "oniric" which means relative to dreams. Keep a "dreamy" typeface, something romantic or nostalgic.

These two colors are too bright. try a navy blue, claret or similar, or dark gray. Keep the background white

Love the symbol. There's a bit tension between the eyebrows and the eye.
Maybe typo and symbol is too close.

Yea, not really working yet.
Typography just doesn't match and it's too close to graphic.
In my opinion this would work either with a very clean sans serif typography or a simple script.
You also have to really take care about composition and proportions to achieve the best result. Try to use 'golden rule' if you know what that is.