Hobbease
Brief from client
Hi, we’re Hobbease. And you’ll be seeing a lot more of us soon.
When you subscribe with us we’ll send you everything you need to pursue your favourite hobbies. As well, Hobbease.com has video lessons, and tons of supportive material to go along with the packages you’ll be receiving.
Hobbease is for people young and old who are interested in learning new things. Or if you already have a favourite hobby, no matter what your skill level, we’ll send you materials to keep you going.
If you’re on the go with a busy schedule, if you’re overwhelmed or if you don’t have access to the resources you need that’s where we come in.
For 60 dollars a month, we’ll keep sending you new materials, lessons, and gifts. You can see some of the items you’ll receive on our website but we like to keep some things a surprise. You can sign up at any time for a variety of subscription options.
So you can learn to play an instrument, build new things, or find the perfect way to express yourself.
What if we took care of all the running around, so you can learn at anytime from anywhere. We’ll teach you in a way that makes sense so you can reach your full potential.
Thank you for the constructive criticism. The brief I provided was the script I was supplied with for their start up video, so it seem pretty explanatory.
As for the harsh words, hobbease doesn't rhyme with obese but thanks for your concern.
In this version we looked to balance the heart better, we tried the uppercase letter, and we're looking for a way to make the square better represent a parcel.
4 Comments
sry don't see big change here, only the h = H and a smaller heart.
Don't like the font either. Try something with the same thickness, that will give it more simplicity and it will fit better with the symbol.
i'm also thinking of a more rounder font, just like the heart's edge.
Keep on going!
what if you try a new symbol, try not to think in the heart thing yopu have in here. Maybe make a more playful lettering instead of the heart or use the parcel in a diferent way
Sorry for the harsh words, but the brief part really reads spammy. And we have a lot of these on a daily basis and it's really annoying. And I was on a bad moon that day.
Sorry to say it, but "Hobbease" doesn't only rhyme with "obese", but it sounds exactly like it. But I guess you're not really responsible for it.
So anyway, this logo doesn't really work. It's look too simplistic. Nothing really says "hobbies" or gives any indication of what that company does. Maybe if you add something like a stamp or a string around the square, it'll be clearer.
Good luck.
You're French, right? Maybe in French English the two words rhyme, but in American English they don't. The Os and S's are pronounced differently between the two words.
But back to the logo, try making some more significant changes before uploading another version. Incorporate hobbies and/or boxes to your symbol and find a friendly font.