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Notionhead

Brief from client 

Working on my own brand. New to this critique. Appreciate all feedback.

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laurensvriens's picture
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You need to make the head contour more visible. Take a more modern type for "nationhead".

webhunter's picture
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i like the idea, but yes please make it more a head..
i dont like the colors either.. but that's personal i think xd.

OctaviOSuite's picture
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Good idea , improve it

geracao ideias's picture
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Same ideas...

geracao ideias's picture
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one more

imdiekem's picture

This idea had occurred to me, but I ultimately don't like the concept. I want the "n" to be able to stand alone as an "n" and the silhouette to stand alone as a silhouette, and finally for them to become one unified image. I feel that adding more literal details to the silhouette breaks up the flow. I also don't care for either font, the kerning, or the center alignment of "design". The shape of your n is closer to what I was going for initially - something more modern, but I received feedback that people weren't seeing the "n". I understand that using the same outer shape between the text and the mark helps to clarify. I'll try to play with that more. I do like the more modern feel. Probably should have stuck with that from the beginning.

webhunter's picture
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yea i think your stuck in this on this desing.
start something else.. "shit happens"

geracao ideias's picture
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Yes. You should go and start something diferent. Other idea. :)

Stephen Fitzgerald's picture
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I still really liked this concept with the simplistic head in the center it worked for me but the new layouts are pretty sweet as well! =D

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